Roommate Adventures by Michael War

Title: Roommate Adventures

Author: Michael War

Publisher: Smashwords

Rating: C+ 

Blurb: Young college student Danny has decided to finally make his life drama free, starting with his living arrangements. But things naturally don’t go as planned, especially when gorgeous new hunk Javi moves in. The two share an instant connection, much to the dismay of their straight roommate Patrick. With sparks flying in every direction, will Danny be able to keep his attraction to Javi in check?

This is the first in the Roommate Adventures series. Stay tuned in the coming weeks to find out what happens next!

This 6,000 word gay erotic short story/romance contains scenes of graphic sex between two men and is intended for mature audiences only.

Review: As the blurb says, it’s a short story. I think it’s too short. I wanted to know more about Patrick, and the ending, offering a nice little surprise twist, felt a bit rushed.

I liked that Danny, the main character, wasn’t perfect. That he’d had a weight problem and was working on paring down. Perfect is always so boring, darlings. Javi, Danny’s love interest, is perfect, and so he is a bit boring. I hope there are a few randy skeletons in that man’s closet.

Patrick’s appearance is brief but pivotal and I wished more time had been spent exploring his motivation and feelings. Perhaps in the next release?

Reviewed by: Red Licorice

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Posted on October 25, 2012, in Red Licorice and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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